William Spengemann's English 5
Professor Emeritus William Spengemann believes that the primary difficulty in teaching
first-year writing courses is moving young writers from narrative (with
which they are generally comfortable) to exposition (which they find
difficult). To accomplish this aim, Professor Spengemann takes students
through a sequence of rhetorical modes, beginning with narrative and
ending with argument. As they move through the assignments, students
learn to rely less on chronological organization and to
organize their essays logically.
Professor Spengemann uses one book, Paradise Lost, as the
basis for eight assignments:
- Narrative: Students are asked to recount the history of
the world according to the "arguments" that precede each book of
Paradise Lost. To complete this assignment, students must extract
the information they need and arrange it chronologically to explain the
history of the fall of Adam and Eve. Note that this narrative is not a
personal story but is entirely text-based. Still, it requires students
to tell a story—something that they are generally comfortable
doing.
- Description: Students are asked to describe Hell
or Paradise so as to convey some single idea. Students have to consider
how to arrange their description so that every detail serves that one
idea.
- Combination of Narration and Description: Students
are asked to narrate Satan's flight from Hell to Paradise as Satan
experiences it. This assignment raises the questions of position and
point of view: Where is Satan when he tells his story?
When does Satan tell his story? Years after his adventure? Or
just after? How do these choices influence point of view? And how
does point of view then influence the entire story? Students are clearly
being asked to consider questions appropriate not only to narrative, but
to analysis as well.
- Process Analysis: Students are asked
in this assignment to describe the creation of the world. Process
analysis is considered the first of the four expository forms in that it
still relies on chronology as an organizing principle. However, process
analysis carries students one step beyond narrative in that they must
consider the ways in which motive, intention, plan, agents, tools,
materials, and procedures condition one another and conspire to
determine the product.
- Cause and Effect: Students are
asked to consider and then to describe the immediate consequences of
the fall. In this assignment, students consider not only what happens,
but why those things happen, and how certain actions lead logically to
certain consequences.
- Comparison and Contrast: Students
are invited to compare any two of the following characters: Adam, Eve,
Satan, and The Son. Here the comfort of the narrative form has vanished
completely; students must seek out logical ways of organizing their
observations regarding the characters being compared.
- Definition: Students are asked to define freedom in
Paradise Lost. Throughout their reading, students will have been
collecting passages concerning freedom. Now they must abstract from
these passages a single definition of freedom that will accommodate them
all. The task of organization here is purely expository.
- Argument: As their final assignment, students construct an
argument for or against the use of Paradise Lost in first-year writing classes,
using the techniques of narrative, description, and exposition they have
learned in order to make their case reasonable, authoritative, and
persuasive.